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Post by shardles on Aug 25, 2015 0:50:21 GMT
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Post by Celestewen on Aug 25, 2015 0:53:33 GMT
I really like the water in the life poem. It however does look colored in a rush? I'm not sure if you intended that, as we all rush through life, but perhaps you could have colored in fuller? Its a bit hard to read the words as they are the same color as the line, perhaps using a different color would have worked better. :3
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Post by shardles on Aug 25, 2015 0:55:30 GMT
I really like the water in the life poem. It however does look colored in a rush? I'm not sure if you intended that, as we all rush through life, but perhaps you could have colored in fuller? Its a bit hard to read the words as they are the same color as the line, perhaps using a different color would have worked better. :3 Oh no that wasn't intended, although I did make it during a car rideXD. Ya I'll try to work on my color choices:) Thank you!
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